Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, December 5, 2019
Lorde - Summer Learning Journey
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Kia ora Tayla, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an excellent job on your poster about Lorde. I think it was an awesome idea for you to have the red background behind the writing ‘6 Facts About Lorde’ as it really helps the print stand out. This helps let your audience know what your blog post is about! I notice that you repeated the same fact for numbers one and three. It’s always good to double check your work before you post it so you can catch any errors!
I enjoy listening to Lorde’s music. ‘Royals’ is one of my favourite songs.
Do you listen to Lorde’s music? If so, which of her songs are your favourites?
Quick Tip- Perhaps you could make the image in your post bigger so that it is easier for your viewers to read.
Nga mihi