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Thursday, December 19, 2019
List 10 Foods I Would Take When I Go Out To Sea
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Kia Ora Tayla, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey,
ReplyDeleteWow Tayla, what an incredible ocean voyage cook list. You have thought of everything! I like that you have prepared specific meals as well as snacks. I also like how you included a mixture of treats and healthy foods to balance out your diet. You’ve obviously thought really hard about what you want to bring.
Yum, weetbixs are such a great breakfast idea. How do you eat your weetbix? Sometimes I cut them in half and put butter and honey on them and eat them dry. They’re delicious. Did you know there used to be a weetbix challenge where you had to try and eat a whole weetbix in under a minute dry. You couldn’t add liquid or have a drink in that minute. It was really hard. I much prefer them with milk and warm, definitely way better!
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon