Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 22, 2018
underwater statue
Underwater statue
As I went under the ice cold water I found a big slippery man, looking like a rock. I kicked my legs to get closer to the slippery rock thing. What is that statue doing there? I think it sunk off a boat and no one noticed.The closer I get the darker and deeper it gets.
I reached slowly out to touch the statue.l started to touch the statue and it felt like goo.As the sun raised the water got hotter. What Is that statue doing there? ‘That statue is like a pile of slimy fish.
It is really weird I have never seen something like it.Is it about to hug me or what? It looks like it has a lot of seaweed on it it is wired. I got closer to it and I was like fish a lot of seaweed and fish and slime gross.
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